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Any short story ideas? With characters, plot, setting? It's just for fun thanks :)

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After a major struggle with two large men, 15 year old Cassandra Williams is knocked unconscious and loaded into an ominous white van. She wakes up hours later to find herself trapped in the attic of a cabin in the middle of mountainous nowhere. Her heart leaps into her throat when she hears the voices of several men and the use of the phrase "slave trade." Using a daring and cunning plan, she severely injures one of the men and escapes. With her captors not far behind, she makes a break for the forest. Will she make it back to civilization and find the authorities before her captors reclaim her and drag her back to the cabin where a terrible fate awaits?

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Darik Majoren
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As he fell she struck him, but not soft as she and Grandpa had played. It was hard and intentional. The strike and forced his head hard into the ground and he went immediately limp. Sal had started to moved to a standing position when Cassie moved in and struck him squarely in the midline solar plexus causing him to expel all air from his lungs. Has he flailed at her she deflected away and struck at the same time . . in a flurry of blurring fists, she had cracked three ribs and struck him in the carotid artery pausing his blood flow to his brain. Sal’s world went dark and he dropped face first into the ground. Cassie stood tall surveying the two assailants for movement. She turned to run back to home, back to safety . . . then stopped. There were others in that cabin and she had heard them say the transport would happen at midnight. The battle between fear and empathy pulled at her . . . she really didn’t have a choice she told herself . . .
Corey The Goofyhawk
Jeez man, I don't remember signing up for that feels trip. Nicely done!
Darik Majoren
Darik Majoren commented
We can work together on this brother Corey.

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