I also like that it rhymes once, but doesn't take it too far.
Sounds great, the between extremes thing makes perfect sense, you shouldn't have any problems with it....unless the person you are presenting it to is stupid >.>
I love yours. We are doing the same thing. I was thinking .. We don't hate! We tolerate
Sounds all right. Most all the colonies were facing different directions.
I don't know if you realize this but Hamilton pulled them together!
I don't know if you realize this but Hamilton pulled them together!
This is brilliant! Imaginative and catching I would be drawn,-no compelled to read this pamphlet