When writing a novel, how important is it to have one main character? (I currently have 20)

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Kim Snowling Profile
Kim Snowling , Love to enjoy a good book!, answered

Writing a novel can be quite difficult, there is no magic formula for novel-writing.  Every novel demands its own structure, its own pace, its own way of looking at  the world.

It can cause you utter frustration and despair, however it can also be one of the most thrillingly creative thing a person can do.

With regards to the characters.  There has to be someone in the centre of the action (protagonist).  Generally, this will be someone that your readers will end up rooting for, not matter how flawed the character may be. They must be flawed to make them realistic.  One of my favourite characters is Dexter Morgan and Forensic Blood Splatter Analyst by day and a serial killer by night, even though I completely disagree with what he does I still do not want him to get caught.  Every great novel is character-driven; your protagonist must be a character worth caring about.

I think you may have to look at your characters and decide which one will take the centre of your novel, 20 lead roles could leave your readers confused.  In reflection I am sure that one character will stand out as the protagonist, and the other 19 characters interact with them helping to build and mould the story.

When you begin your novel, it is less important to know where it is going than it is to know who your protagonist is.  It is easy to start writing without a thought of what events will occur, but it is almost impossible to start a story without considering who will be at the centre of those events.

Just remember that your characters create the plot, it is their natural motivations and desires which will drive the conflict in your novel, and their reactions which will shape the events in your story.

Or another way of thinking about it is like the solar system, your main character is the sun, without it no other element of your story can survive.

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Yo Kass
Yo Kass commented
Great answer Kim! Love the solar system analogy.
Miranda Innaimo
Miranda Innaimo commented
Very good answer. "Every great novel is character-driven; your protagonist must be a character worth caring about." I think, regardless of how many actual protagonists I decide upon, they are all worth caring about; I've developed such intricate characters- each with their own identities, emotions, tendencies-that my readers are gushing to know the outcome of each of them.
Allen Taylor
Allen Taylor commented
Good answer. Better than the one I was thinking about.
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Lily Bradic , Literature and Creative Writing student, writer, and reader, answered

I don't think it's feasible to have twenty main characters, unless these characters are part of a unit or a group - The Rules of Attraction by Bret Easton Ellis is a good example of this.

It's great that you feel you know all twenty characters so well, but that doesn't mean they all have to be main characters.

Knowing Your Characters

You should know your supporting (or secondary) characters almost as well as you know your main character. If you don't, the secondary characters will seem like two-dimensional cardboard cutouts who only serve a function - for example, the 'best friend', the 'love interest' or the 'rival'.

In real life, nobody exists just as a best friend, love interest or rival - they don't just serve that one purpose, or exist on the peripheries of somebody else's life. In good fiction, characters are no different.

Books With Plenty Of Main Characters

A Game of Thrones has dozens of important characters, and despite how important most of them are, you don't consider them to be 'main' characters, purely because there are so many of them.

The same goes for the Harry Potter series - and it's not just a coincidence that both of these examples are fantasy.

Instead of counting each important character as a 'main' character, you split them up in your head into allegiances, or into characters you like and characters you don't, or into interesting and dull story-lines (which is very fluid, and therefore quite difficult).

Writing A Book With Twenty Main Characters

If you write a book with twenty main characters, the reader will automatically 'discard' the ones that are of little interest to them.

In a novel, you just won't have the space to make the reader care about all these characters in the way that you do - or at least, the reader won't care enough to consider them 'main' characters, because they won't know them well enough.

My immediate concern would be how well the reader could actually hold all these different characters in their head at once. They'd have to be very different, without being caricatures, for me to remember who's who.

Add the peripheral characters into the mix, and there's just far too many characters, and not enough space for you to write about them in any great detail.

With writing, less is more, so I'd recommend you ask yourself the following questions about all of your main characters:

  • Is s/he crucial to the plot?
  • What is their role in the story?
  • Could this role be feasibly given to another character?
  • Imagine the story without this character. Would there be a huge loss?
  • Could I 'match' this character with several others, and write a book just about them?
  • Why is s/he a 'main character', as opposed to just a 'character'?

Allen Taylor Profile
Allen Taylor , You can do whatever you can get away with ..., answered

In fiction, anything is possible. But not all things are profitable.

In short, if you can get away with (that is, if readers give you a thumbs up), then you can do it. However, 20 main characters is difficult if by "main" character you mean lead character.

Your lead character is your protagonist. You can have more than one protagonist, but it's better to have multiple protagonists if they act as a group. For instance, if you are writing a gang-related novel, your protagonist might be Gang A and the antagonist Gang B. The individual gang members in each gang have their own personalities and interests and perhaps the members of Gang A each are an extension of the Gang A protagonist. Your challenge would be to make your reader care about each member of the gang. Still, for an average-size novel, 20 protagonists would be too much.

Twenty might work better if your work is of an epic proportion such as Alex Haley's Roots where each story within the overall story has its own protagonist. You have to develop each character's story fully and completely and make them a protagonist within their own story-within-the-story. Doing it that way, you might get away with it.

You could read Chaucer's Canterbury Tales to get a good idea of how it was done there.

At any rate, it would be difficult, but I wouldn't say impossible. A lot depends on your skill as an author and fiction writer.

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Yo Kass commented
Allen's suggestion to check out the Canterbury Tales is a good one - I can't think of too many works that pull off multiple lead characters as effectively.

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