I'd love to review your writing Taylor ! I told you I would be waiting for it. You might just ask Didge as he's written a fine book and I'm sure he could steer you in the right direction.
Who should I get to review my writing? I don't want to ask my friends because I don't think they can give me honest, useful feedback, so who should I ask?
Post them online in writing forums and you will get some pretty honest critique.
The best professional way would be to take your writing to writing labels and publishers. Simply they read it and they will give you a hard honest and heavy opinion about your book, note, writing and all your texts. And you have an automatic chance to gain their attention and they offer you contract and publishing serve. Even if that don't be your intention. It's a few sided work by bringing your book to professionals into the industry. With that way,you can also test yourself in today's current pro writing world as well.
One of your teachers.